Show Us Your Verse

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wow, getting fired for poetry. that fucking sucks, if that's what it ultimately came down to. i'd still be pissed too.

still, think of the verse cred that could get you in this thread if you wear it right. :wink:

take a note from the masters: write when you are sober, swim across swift straits & reach for the moon from the decks of boats when you're drunk.

Show Us Your Verse

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Ty Webb wrote:
Skronk wrote:
Ty Webb wrote:I hate free verse
And curse it to the purgatory
Of the lazy and the random
Line
break

Find a rhythm or a meter or
at least a coherent
and consistent trope
you pretentious wannabe
diarist*




*Walt Whitman, all is forgiven because you are so sexy


Rhyming
-is
damned
cliche-
best
leave it
to
the past



Where did I mention rhyming?


I figured I'd make light of a style that people who hate free verse might find pleasing.
Marsupialized wrote:I want a piano made out of jello.
It's the only way I'll be able to achieve the sound I hear in my head.

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