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lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:32 pm
by lemur68_Archive
Steve Miller never heard two words he couldn't make rhyme with each other.

Billy mack is a detective down in texas
You know he knows just exactly what the facts is
He aint gonna let those two escape justice
He makes his livin off of the peoples taxes

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:40 pm
by Skronk_Archive
Matching syllables sounds better than rhyming.



Cue the Hetfield "Breath"/"Death" crap.

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:49 pm
by mt_Archive
Not Crap, but can be overdone e.g. Bruce Spingsteen's Blinded By The Light (which he admits to wearing out a rhyming dictionary on).

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:32 am
by that damned fly_Archive
i swear to god...
if i hear one more cocksucker
rhyme tragic with magic
i might choke the fucker
out.

nice.

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:56 am
by Benny_Archive
old and cold, and older and colder pisses me off.

but not crap for merritt alone.

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 9:38 am
by Boombats_Archive
I start rhymin' and rip into your mental hymen
You can't do shit because I didn't say "Simon"
and it's simple, I pop you like a pimple
dick you in your dimples and rip out both your pierced nipples

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:56 pm
by world of pee_Archive
Boombats wrote:You can't do shit because I didn't say "Simon"

i might bite this rhyme.

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:02 pm
by that damned fly_Archive
world of pee wrote:
Boombats wrote:You can't do shit because I didn't say "Simon"

i might bite this rhyme.


you're a biter! (futurama reference.)

lyrical device: rhyming

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:02 pm
by Boombats_Archive
world of pee wrote:
Boombats wrote:You can't do shit because I didn't say "Simon"

i might bite this rhyme.


I will bite off your fucking ear, w.o.p.

You went from sucking to vacuuming
fucking playing two hand touch now I'm tackling
smacking you backhand with mad rap acumen
I get black and put you in traction.