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Show Us Your Verse

Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:36 am
by SweetDaddyPatty_Archive
do you use the person's real name to make it seem serious?

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:40 am
by kerble_Archive
I am serious, you dolt.

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:45 am
by SweetDaddyPatty_Archive
had me going

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:46 am
by kerble_Archive
so go ahead and go. don't let me stop you.

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:48 am
by Nina_Archive
Great. We now get you AND who is that, Worthy? (sp?)

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:53 am
by kerble_Archive
I already blocked the shot by right clicking in mozilla and selecting "block images from lakerssomethingsomething.com"


Paddy's got no game.

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:27 am
by Nina_Archive
kerble wrote:I already blocked the shot by right clicking in mozilla and selecting "block images from lakerssomethingsomething.com"


Paddy's got no game.


I didn't know I could do that.

That is a god damn swell trick.

Salut!

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 3:49 am
by SweetDaddyPatty_Archive
congratulations

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:22 am
by Ty Webb_Archive
Skronk wrote:
Ty Webb wrote:I hate free verse
And curse it to the purgatory
Of the lazy and the random
Line
break

Find a rhythm or a meter or
at least a coherent
and consistent trope
you pretentious wannabe
diarist*




*Walt Whitman, all is forgiven because you are so sexy


Rhyming
-is
damned
cliche-
best
leave it
to
the past



Where did I mention rhyming?

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:25 am
by The Code is Almighty_Archive
Apologies.

For context. It wasn't something I posted while at work. It was something I wrote in my free time. Someone at work decided to seek me out on the internet and found the myspace page through my publisher's site. They made the case at work that I was disturbed because of it and shouldn't work in a position related to children.

I guess the thing that bothered me was the insinuation that I would go drunk to work. No longer working there is still a bit of a sore subject.